NEUTRAL
Hello! Unfortunately: you are required to have a working microphone as per the staff rules, which you didn't read. Your paragraphs are underwhelming and could use some work. which you did give a read through.
If that's a problem you can fix sooner rather than later, I'm willing to overlook that
Good luck!
+1
+age
+playtime
+fixed/reread staff rules
+paragraphs (after editing)
After going over it again, you did a good job. Hope you get a chance to show what you got
Neutral
did not read the staff rules. i would go back and read them carefully again. everything else looks good. my choice could change depending on if you read every line carefully in the staff rules and make changes as needed.
EDIT: changes that needed to be made were made but too a few attempts. i’m gonna keep my opinion in the middle with this.