Neutral - Haven't talked to you much and to be fully honest I have over 5k hours in this community and have been around the block a few times when it came to staff applications, people's ability to write paragraphs isn't a huge deal to me, but lacking the time to try and make a good paragraph I can notice. You're 14 I don't expect Harvard quality writing. My suggestion, take your time and analyze your writing that will give a elaborated response to the question. I will change my response once I see the change
best of luck to you