Burbrink

how can i make it better if you dont mind me asking

if i my ask whats wrong after the edit of the paragraph and downloading team speak ?

Yeah the paragraph wasn't the best tbh but next time ill make it better 100% and Thank you bro means alot!

In-game name: BurbrinkAge: 17SteamID (https://steamid.io/):STEAM_0:0:156850233Warns: 0Timezone: East cost (GMT-5)Playtime?: | Burbrink has played for 85:04:43. Do you have access to TeamSpeak and a microphone?: [YES/NO] Teamspeak-No It is downloading rn / Mic-Yes / Discord-Yes Do you have the ability to record Garry's Mod videos?:[YES/NO] Yes Referral(s): [What administrator recommended you to apply?] None Past experiences as staff: [Optional] On a server Called NWA i was a mod for about 4 months Why should we choose you over other applicants? [minimum 2 paragraphs] i play mostly nights monday-thursday and theres barley any staff members online. I really think i can help the server at nights to stop the prop block prob abuse etc. When i was falsely banned it was a old mod who just wanted to fuck up the server and no staff was on.But about me Im 17 and a senior in High School i've played baseball basically my whole life and ive been around sports my whole life so i know what respect is and if you respect me ill respect you. I really like this DarkRP server one of the better ones on Gary's Mod. i try to make friends not enemies. I wanna make sure the players are enjoying themselves as i do on this server and still keeping the game fun for others. i also wanna lower the time it takes to claim a sit. I want to enforce these rules on a very respectful level. If i were to be staff i would do everything i can to make sure everyone is having fun while not breaking the rules. !!(NEW PARAGRAPH)!! Have you ever been banned or punished on any server? If so, Include details i was falsely banned on this server other then that no Have you made any previous applications, If so when?: no How much time do you have to contribute to the role?: 5+ hours a day If you have any, what hobbies or activities are you involved in outside of Garry's Mod? I like to play Baseball and Basketball and go outside with my homies i go to night school aka i go to school at 315 insted of 6am Did you read the staff rules?: Yes i did

i was chilling in my base and this guy tp'd to me then tpd his friend and killed me took my money and banned me for 4 days for reason ban, the mods name was Renyna and his friend was kill takular it wont let me add a pic to this but i can send them through discord- Jordiii#2382