I'd also like to say you have improved on the server too. With a lengthy trial phase to see if you have what it needs, I can see you becoming a good gm. +1
+1 The application reads well and all the ideas are good. I agree with Daph that some fine tuning with a S GM+ could be in place, but otherwise you are a great candidate.
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You have pulled a good amount of community support for your app. The revisions made established you to be a great Gamemaster candidate!
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+1 Bitlucky has been apart of this community for a decent amount of time now and has become someone that you can trust but also feel relaxed around. I feel that he would be a great addition to the GM team. Add me to referrals.
I think the event ideas are good I think a little bit more insight into it would help, but some of the other paragraphs are lacking. So now this will be a -1 from me too some revisions might change my mind.