Theta2

*Sigh* This another one I'm gonna overlook. I gave him my referral and know that he is a great staff member. The paragraphs need improvement definitely but even though they lack I'm still going to +1

Still probably shouldn't have been warned because hits are hits even tho the logs weren't working. But hey, it's no big deal

You guys are so ignorant bruv, we literally take age into account, Aki's paragraphs were great for a 13 year old. I did have a longer response written out with like 2 concerns but my shit fucked up and deleted it all. Basically, your first warn doesn't make sense to me. If someone didn't know you had a hit on them then why did you still get warned if you were enforcing a hit? You did "advertise" your last application which I don't quite agree with but shit happens. And your paragraphs are a bit short but have 2 reasons each and follow with a sentence of elaboration for each reason which is ALL WE WANT BRO. You did good, +1

The only staff app that I will not nit pick to hell because I trust this man to be as excellent has he was in the past. This man was a MRP manager for god's sake! +1

Well, the kid is 13 so I will take this into consideration. Huge run on sentence that could easily be fixed by replacing the commas into periods. (Overlooking because of age but still pointing it out.) Another run on sentence but I think it is a typo due to your capital where a new sentence would have started. Otherwise, great stuff so far. 2nd paragraph has nothing major for me to point out. Aki, you've made an app that is way better than some applicants that were older than you and you're only 13. This is a great look for you even with the minor issues. You're a great person in game and active. +1

The streak broke. -1 Only 2 sentences in this paragraph have meaning. The other two in my opinion are pointless filler. The second paragraph however is way better and has no major mistakes within it. I think I've seen your name on tab/in chat once or twice but I've never met you myself. If you fix the paragraph above I will happily change to a +1 because of the communities response above mine. Good luck

Jokes on you, I don't see anything terribly wrong with the staff app. I've spoken to you once and it was a nice time and it seems a majority agree with that. +1

Huge improvements on the paragraphs along with having seen you once or twice since the last app gives me the easy decision to +1 this app. Good luck!

2GA RFR SGT Hanako I wanna join the test because I've been fairly interested in MRP recently, hanging around it. I've played last year on Chaharikar and would love to see the new map that Garnet has been working on!

Well, I did tell him that I would do this and he responded very confident so I guess its time to read c; Well as expected, I can't find anything to necessarily point out that needs fixing. This app is the best one I have seen in a long time. I believe that with your past experience it would take little to nothing to get your gears shifting to become staff once again. +1 *edit* Fetn lets be fr, you didn't go in depth on the app because its long, slacker.

+1 Mans joined a ts server and called conway a fag again 10/10 would listen to again

not my steamid you blasian retard

1. Theta 2. DarkRP 3. STEAM_0:1:580723024 4. VIP, Blue vape, Karambit Fade, Machete, Fists = 38 creds

This is a run on sentence containing grammar errors as well. Also, Iḿ not sure a guy is gonna be satisfied with getting a MRDM ban. Another run on sentence. Also, we have plenty of UK staff to be on when US staff aren't but I see what you're trying to say. This isn't a reason why you should be chosen over other applicants. You're just complimenting the community. Your staff experience is great and your experience with customer service is great aswell. I would like to give you a +1 but I simply cannot simply for 2 reasons. 1. Your 2nd paragraph falls pretty short and only includes one reason to pick you over other staff members. Your first paragraph also has a p chunky run on sentence. 2. I haven't seen you once. This could be because we get on at different times. I'm willing to look over my 2nd issue if you fix the issues with your paragraphs. -1

Preach it, I know ur gonna do great and you passed ur paragraphs once I doubt I need to scan yo shit. +1

Cough Run on sentence but alright. Yes, that is what we expect of a staff member. This doesn't make you much different from others. Half of this paragraph is just saying how much you love helping others and the server in general. Which is good, if it wasn't half of ur paragraph. couple run on sentences. Yes, that is what we expect from a staff member and every applicant. This paragraph is just a rewording of the first one. -1 I'd say make your reasons to be chosen over others different in the second paragraph, but keep the first one!

shut up nigga Anyways congrats to everyone who was promoted

A lot of applicants know the rules. Also this sentence has 2 misspellings. People come and go on Garnet. Both of these sentences are unneeded and are filler in my eyes. This rubs me the wrong way. Plus, if you're doing this as a user, what would change if you were staff? You can't take ur own reports and staffing is just the enforcer. You stated this in your former paragraph, filler. Boy do I have some news for you! You can do this as a normal user. Filler/ still can do this as only a user. TL;DR Your paragraphs are no different from past applicants and there are grammar/spelling errors sprinkled around. Rewrite your paragraphs or just the problems mentioned above and I will redecide my verdict but for now. -1

use /playtime base builder to get your exact playtime. First sentence can be in the past experiences section. The second sentence is put together poorly and you should probably refresh yourself on the rules because you didn't read the staff rules so I doubt you are up to date on the !motd rules. Graduated with this grammar? I would fail you if I was an english teacher expecting 2 paragraphs. The grammar is poor in this paragraph and definitely needs to be reworked on. There's not much else to say about the application. The paragraph (singular) is pretty sloppy. You also need to add another paragraph on top of this one. -1

You're gonna get bored of that real easy lol To be honest, your paragraphs are fine to me. A little bit of minor grammar errors but you're 13 so that doesn't bother me. You're quite new but if what you say is true as you read the rules at least once a day you will know the rules quite easily as a staff member. You could add a LITTLE more to your paragraphs but honestly, Imma slap it with a +1 (Theta responding with a +1?!?!? Unheard of.)

I believe this post is a report against the staff member and the other one is supposed to be a ban appeal

Really put off doing this one, but it's still open so why not. ahem. First of all, am I reading genius lyrics because god damn that's how it looks. Sheesh, I highly suggest waiting 2 weeks to get these off your record before reapplying if you get denied. Buddy, implying that our current staff team don't know what they're doing will put you in the wrong direction. Yes, we know what squeakers are, you don't need to explain what you mean to us by extending your application. People are going to lie to you all the time in sits. But the truth is, you won't be able to do anything about it without some real proof. How do you plan to do this? This in my opinion, will not assist you in your application. I didn't do a full diagnosis on the application because 1, I'm tired and 2, it's such a pain to read this. There's countless grammar errors and the format hurts me. Huge -1.