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It seems like you're repeating yourself here, how will you help the server, how will you help the community. Give us a few things that you think you're qualified for helping. Next time explain what you think you'll be best at.
Seemed like this is just an almost copy and paste of the first paragraph.
This is probably the strongest paragraph you have so far, even though it is still null. A lot of it seems to just be constant repeating of the same thing but just different wording.
My advice to you is to try to get other people to read your app before posting it, I saw multiple grammar errors. Repeating yourself was a huge problem, and the paragraphs seemed to be pretty short only consisting of 2 -3 sentences each.