In-game name:DubzAndTiers
Discord username: (killbotsonsite-DubzAndTiers
Age:17SteamID (STEAM_0:1:693510653)Active Warns:Random Deathmatch - Diss in sitTimezone:NA WESTCurrent Playtime:143:16:25Do you have access to Discord and a microphone?: yes
Are you a member of the Garnet Gaming DarkRP Discord?: yes]Do you have the ability to record Garry's Mod videos?:yesReferral(s): shleemyPast experiences as staff: noneWhy should we choose you over other applicants?: The reason why should pick me over others is because I'm a very kind person and I can defend a person if i have to. I'm very patient for a lot of people. I can help new players or players that have a lot of questions. The reason why you should pick me instead of anyone else is because i am a Big hearted person that cares for everyone in the server no matter who. I also realize that this is a game so any issues on the server are all going to be short lived so the best way to deal with them is to appeal to people's reason as best as possible. I also haven't found a server with as many cool people before. I have made many friends that I have been playing with for hours on end these past couple days and would like to help the staff out like they helped me.
One of the reasons you should pick me is that I am a fast learner, for example, if someone is trying to teach me something like rules, or what to do in a situation I take it to memory. I am also pretty good a teaching others too, just in case I must tell someone the rules or tell them what to do and what not to do. I have a passion for Garry's Mod . I've memorized the rules and have followed them well. I believe I would do a great job enforcing the rules and keeping the server a place people want to be. I like to accept my mistakes when they happenHave you ever been banned or punished on any server? If so, Include details: I have not gotten banned before on any server.Have you made any previous applications, If so when?: I have not made any applications before. How much time do you have to contribute to the role?: about 20-40 hours a week.If you have any, what hobbies or activities are you involved in outside of Garry's Mod?: I love playing football and basketball and I love chess.Did you read the staff rules?: Yes I did. 🙂
No need to apologize little bro, you didn't do anything wrong. I don't blame you for resigning tbh
Welcome to the club.
(You didn't actually mention so I didn't see it until now)
You're too ambiguous in your answers to the first part of the application. You don't give a determinant amount of time for both your "Playtime" on the server and how much time you want to dedicate. You're repetitive in your reason for why you should be chosen, mostly in your experience which I think you rely too much on for your reasons. You seem quite arrogant in that aspect of being an experienced GM; many people are already aware of your previous experience, yet it feels as though you're pushing your experience to be the core aspect of your application.
I don't care that you copied and pasted the events from a google doc (if they're yours, they're yours and I'd probably do the same), but try to remove the numbers at the left side or fix them (they're inconsistent for what they mean, and it shows that it was copied from a doc without much effort in adjusting/cleaning up for the application).
I like the event timeline, it does make things simple as being a GM and creates a good checklist to follow. However, in my opinion, there's almost too much detail. Not in the sense of being overloaded with information, but in the events being too dependent on players making specific actions or requiring navy to read a script, it feels really robotic and gray. But, to each their own, and that's why this little paragraph does not effect my overall score.
I do like the event ideas also, they still fit within the nature of star wars, yet they still show a unique story created by yourself.
Finally, spelling and writing. You're a GM, and you're almost constantly going to be typing both events and stories out to the players. I'm not going to point out every spelling mistake or run-on sentence, because that's a waste of both of our time and I don't want to be a douche about it, but it is genuinely something that most people need to keep their A-game on (especially if their role is revolved around storytelling). I too of course make my own spelling mistakes, but I fix them when I can myself.
Due to Johnny and Jaros' responses, I do hope to meet you and get to know you as they have.
If you want to ask me about any of my responses, criticize my statements, or simply clarify anything, send me a message on discord (jeffory) and I'll respond to ya. -1
Good evening,
You were banned in accordance with the posted D3A guidelines for Propblocking spawn. Attached is proof of you propblocking spawn. The reason for the 2 weeks is normal propblock only affects 3-5 people at any given time, but propblocking spawn affects many more people.
https://medal.tv/games/garrys-mod/clips/kfs6ueqsco7BGf4SX?invite=cr-MSw3WFosMjcxMjkzMTg
Good evening,
You were banned in accordance with the posted D3A guidelines for Propblocking spawn. Attached is proof of you propblocking spawn. You have been around for a while, you and I know eachother, and frankly this is not something I would have expected you to do. The reason for the 2 weeks is normal propblock only affects 3-5 people at any given time, but propblocking spawn affects many more people.
https://medal.tv/games/garrys-mod/clips/kfs6ueqsco7BGf4SX?invite=cr-MSw3WFosMjcxMjkzMTg