Neutral
I hate being harsh but even after you fixed your paragraphs, I'm still going to have to give you -1. The paragraphs seem a little bit suspicious, and I can't judge you as I have never seen you. I'd recommend you get more playtime! You do have some +'s like age, and referrals. If you need any help with this application, please dm me on discord and I will be glad to help. (my discord is the same as my name)
I've talked to him on discord and he seems like a friendly guy. I'm changing this to neutral because of the reasons stated above! Very friendly dude and I hope to maybe see him on the staff team.