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Poor/simple grammar/capitalization. As in you have 39 different glaring grammatical errors within only 360 words of text. One error every nine words. Despite some members' beliefs, this, if anything, surely does not indicate high quality in the applicant.
Active warnings are a bit of a red flag for staff apps. Not always but sometimes. This is not the biggest deal in the world.
My main point is as Schyzo said, your paragraphs are poor in construction, and it does not indicate high capability. This, and I feel your hours should be at least a couple hundred higher.