Hello, im glad you decided to apply for staff!
a few things tho, i recommend you getting to know the community better before applying, i for example have no knowledge of who you are , try to get in TS and getting started talking to ppl , actively taking part in events may help as well and overall letting ppl know who you are.
in addition it says on the application format that you need to write two paragraphs, and what you wrote is not even close to that.
anyways, Good luck!