Kindle Fire- Moderator Application

[DemonHunter2315 0]

In-game name: Kindle/Longshot
 

Age:16
 

SteamID (https://steamid.io/): STEAM_0:0:159324462
 

Warns: 0
 

Timezone: EST
 

Playtime?: 726
 

Do you have access to TeamSpeak and a microphone?:  Yes
 

Do you have the ability to record Garry's Mod videos?: Yes
 

    Referral(s): I wanted to apply myself. None
 

    Past experiences as staff: I have none
 

    Why should we choose you over other applicants? I am a responsible person who has put a lot of time into this server. I like to have fun but i hate when people are ruining things for everyone else. I want to be able to stop people from minging and ruining the experience for everyone else. I will be honest i've never been a Moderator before but i will not let you down if you choose me. I am pretty active on the server and I am a donator.  I have been on mostly every day since ive joined the server. The only days i missed were because i went to a friends house. I will be loyal to the server. I have not been on any other servers in weeks. I just want to be able to help others like the kind people on this server have done for me. I want to stop people from having bad experiences on this server and leaving.

I am not very busy so i have a lot of time to be on the server. I answer when contacted and i always keep people informed.  If i wont be on i will make sure you know so you don't have to worry about me not showing up for something. I am sometimes forgetful but i do show up to meetings whenever i can. I am very honest and i will tell you the truth 100% of the time. Lying is not something i do unless it is to protect someone. I don't know what else to tell you and i really hope you take me into consideration. I will not let you down. I understand my responsibilities as a Moderator. Its a privilege and if i make a mistake it will reflect onto me. I can be level headed and I am decently smart. I have tolerance and I try to be fair to everyone. I am eager to show my worth as a staff member.  I want to mainly play on the server as a normal user, but be able to switch over to a mod if there is a problem that needs to be solved. I am a person who is generous but fair. If someone is doing something whether they are my best friend or my worst enemy i will give them the same treatment. I will not be bias.

    Have you ever been banned or punished on any server? If so, Include details No
 

    Have you made any previous applications, If so when?: No
 

    How much time do you have to contribute to the role?:  When i'm on i can be on Moderator I will not AFK on it. I can contribute about an hour a day at least. 
 

    If you have any, what hobbies or activities are you involved in outside of Garry's Mod?: I have school which is almost over. I'm an athlete so i go outside occasionally and I play soccer. I love to play basketball. I love playing on my xbox. I have a girlfriend that i see every week so those will be days when im not on. I am on at night for at least an hour or 2
 

Did you read the staff rules?: Longshot

Edited June 8, 2020 by DemonHunter2315

[eli_ 641]

3 minutes ago, DemonHunter2315 said:

Did you read the staff rules?: Yes

I'd recommend reading the staff rules. There may be something you missed.

Also your paragraphs were alright. I do think they could use a bit of beefing up. You seemed to repeat yourself a few times so I'd recommend to try and steer away from that. Other than that I have nothing against you. You seem to be very dedicated to the server. Fix this up and I will change it to a +1.

-1 for now.

[Snapper 36]

-1 for improper format and not reading the rules

Don’t just say you have a lot of time, be detailed so the SA’s can make the best decision on who to pick as staff

[DemonHunter2315 0]

do you want me to just reply or make a new post?

[eli_ 641]

1 minute ago, DemonHunter2315 said:

do you want me to just reply or make a new post?

Edit your current post.

[DemonHunter2315 0]

its been edited

[special 318]

-1 I haven't really met you yet to see how you are as a person but two issues I see is your contribution and your application itself. In my opinion, one hour a day isn't really enough to contribute to a staff role that has responsibilities to uphold. I understand that you might be busy with IRL things but if that's the case, then I don't think you would be ready enough to contribute such a role. The application itself is appealing at some parts but does lack the structure of having two paragraphs that also includes few grammatical errors, which isn't really a big issue at the moment. Typical high school paragraphs are at least 5+ sentences but when applying for a role you wish to gain,  you should show it with a good written paragraph that isn't close to the bear minimum. I recommend halting for now with obtaining a staff position and contribute more activity on the server while getting to know others.

Edited June 8, 2020 by special

[Phantom 1,548]

Denied.

Not much support and I agree with the criticism. Take it to heart and improve.