HonestDog_ 4 Posted August 30, 2021 Share Posted August 30, 2021 (edited) Your In-Game Name: HonestDog Age:14SteamID (https://steamid.io/ STEAM_0:0:12949864Warns:NoneTimezone:CSTPlaytime:N/ADo you have access to TeamSpeak and a microphone?: [YES/NO] YESCurrent Ranks:NonePosition you are applying for: ARC CDR BlitzReferrals:NonePast Experience: [Optional] 1LT on MRP and I would say I'm pretty good at showing leadership. Why should we choose you over other applicants? [minimum 2 paragraphs] The reason you would choose me over applicants is because I've been an officer in a server I would like to lead a faction because it would show my leadership skills and it does not look like anyone has applied yet also I would like to help the server as a CDR when it opens. I would really like to share some of my Military RP experience with people who would join my faction and I feel like I would be a good role model im not very mingey but I would need help with some of the docs but I feel like I'd make a good and responsible leader, even though I'm 14 I honestly am more responsible then people who are like 18ish and I feel like this faction needs that. I feel like I could benefit the server as this role, also I love star wars and I've played on many some swrp servers and they seem like they are meant for me, since I heard that GG was opening SWRP I was like I main this community and I think the people are nice in it so I would really like this role it would be an honor. One of the reasons I should be picked is because I know the lore of my character and I know the lore of the ARC troopers Jesse being my favorite and I honestly think its cool. I want to help the server in ways like making decisions on what should be added. I want to help with training recruits (if you know the lore you know why) like creating the docs because ARC is in command of clone Troops, Also I would be a greater candidate because I have experience as an officer on a server and if you know me I'm sometimes minge but I'm also very strict so I feel like I would be a good candidate. I believe that I'm on good terms with the community I know I have a good relationship with everyone so that would be good with people on the server.Have you ever been banned or punished on any server? If so, include details. Yes once for Mass RDM because I was an uncaring CPL on the US side and I decided to switch to RU and massed but I'm not like that anymore so don't worry How would you use the role you are applying for? I would use it mainly for to help other I would use it to lead and make my faction and all other factions good, also I would use it for RP because the story of the character i chose isn't very long I would create a bigger story for Blitz. How much time do you have to contribute to the role?: around 6 hours a day every other week in game but in docs around 11 hours a day every day.If you have any, what hobbies or activities are you involved in outside of Garry’s Mod? Esports, band, choir, swing choir, and basketball none of these will take up much time considering there gonna be during school.Did you read the application rules?:HonestDog Whenever I get my ID or someone as a staff gets it for me lock it then Edited August 31, 2021 by MRPHonestDog Changed alot of things I hope you guys like it now 5 Link to comment
Forums Moderator Python 455 Posted August 30, 2021 Forums Moderator Share Posted August 30, 2021 This is a very poor application especially for a Commander position, id recommend looking at other apps and go from there. obviously don't copy them word for word but just look how they are made and layer out. 1 Link to comment
HonestDog_ 4 Posted August 30, 2021 Topic Author Share Posted August 30, 2021 9 hours ago, Python said: This is a very poor application especially for a Commander position, id recommend looking at other apps and go from there. obviously don't copy them word for word but just look how they are made and layer out. Yeah I'm on phone RN so its hard to edit things like that but ill try to make it better I also appreciate the feedback and I do agree with you. 1 Link to comment
HonestDog_ 4 Posted August 31, 2021 Topic Author Share Posted August 31, 2021 Just gonna say this I might not be the right age but I believe that I can be a good leader im only about 3 months to wait so I'm not that far from the age requirement. Link to comment
HonestDog_ 4 Posted August 31, 2021 Topic Author Share Posted August 31, 2021 6 hours ago, MRPHonestDog said: Yeah I'm on phone RN so its hard to edit things like that but ill try to make it better I also appreciate the feedback and I do agree with you. Like I've been doing this entire app on phone so I can't make it more readable its also so much slower to type on phone. Link to comment
Bortnik 451 Posted September 1, 2021 Share Posted September 1, 2021 Countless grammatical errors, pretty informal application, and a lot of repetition of similar ideas in the 2 paragraphs. You’re also not 15, so you shouldn’t have even applied until you had perms or in the 3 months till your birthday. This is most likely an insta deny due to your age. Rework pretty much most of the application, then re-apply when you meet the age limit/get perms. During those 3 months do your best to show leadership and maturity in army. -1 Link to comment
HonestDog_ 4 Posted September 1, 2021 Topic Author Share Posted September 1, 2021 I get it im on phone and was when I made this I hope you know how hard it is to do stuff though its hard because you can't make it that formal. Link to comment
Bortnik 451 Posted September 2, 2021 Share Posted September 2, 2021 14 hours ago, HonestDog_ said: I get it im on phone and was when I made this I hope you know how hard it is to do stuff though its hard because you can't make it that formal. I meant informal by your word choice, and grammatical errors. It’s more like a message to a friend, not an application. Regardless, you play MRP, so why can’t you write it on your pc? Link to comment
HonestDog_ 4 Posted September 2, 2021 Topic Author Share Posted September 2, 2021 Dont have access to my pc atm Link to comment
HonestDog_ 4 Posted September 3, 2021 Topic Author Share Posted September 3, 2021 On 8/29/2021 at 11:04 PM, HonestDog_ said: 1 Link to comment
JackJJ 498 Posted September 10, 2021 Share Posted September 10, 2021 On 9/3/2021 at 5:39 PM, HonestDog_ said: 1 1 1 3 Link to comment
HonestDog_ 4 Posted September 10, 2021 Topic Author Share Posted September 10, 2021 6 hours ago, JackJJ said: Uhh I did not mean do do a blank quote 1 Link to comment
BingBoing 33 Posted September 22, 2021 Share Posted September 22, 2021 -1 I don't think you are ready for this position because you don't have a whole lot of officer experience. You don't know how to run them and have no experience being in a high responsibility position. Link to comment
HonestDog_ 4 Posted September 23, 2021 Topic Author Share Posted September 23, 2021 1 hour ago, BingBoing said: -1 I don't think you are ready for this position because you don't have a whole lot of officer experience. You don't know how to run them and have no experience being in a high responsibility position. I do get that but I could be trained to be a good leader. Honestly I might no deserve the position but I do deserve experiencing it like if I'm bad or good at it of im bad the thats on me but I could have help running it by other CDR's and admins 1 1 Link to comment
huskaii 586 Posted September 23, 2021 Share Posted September 23, 2021 11 minutes ago, HonestDog_ said: I do get that but I could be trained to be a good leader. Honestly I might no deserve the position but I do deserve experiencing it like if I'm bad or good at it of im bad the thats on me but I could have help running it by other CDR's and admins Or instead of having other cdrs and admins help you run it, just put one of them in charge and you work your way up like any other person, prove you are capable of being a good leader, and go from there? 1 Link to comment
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