[Neyo/Ranger] - Game Master Application

[GAMEGURU924 6]

In-game name: Neyo/Ranger
Age: 18
SteamID (https://steamid.io/): STEAM_0:1:104395647
Warns : 0
Timezone: EST
Playtime?: 174:56:32
Do you have access to TeamSpeak and a microphone?: [YES/NO]
Do you have the ability to record Garry's Mod videos?:[YES/NO]
Referral(s): [What administrator recommended you to apply?] No one
Past experiences as a Game Master: [Optional] none
Why should we choose you over other applicants? [minimum 2 paragraphs]  When it comes to why I should be picked  over other Applicants I'm going to be honest I don't really have a lot I can use to be better than others I have no past experience being a game master I have no past experience being a mod. What I do have is ideas for good events that I can bring to the table ever since my first event on this server I have always thought of events that i thought would be cool for the players and fun for me to run.  I have also talked to others to see what type of events that they want to see and I would use some of there suggestions for events as well.

When it comes to what is do have that some people don't I am a commander of a battalion I have been with the sever for 1-2 months now and I want to help the server grow and I want to see everyone have fun when the get on. If i get picked to be a game master I will work to create the best events I can think of and try to make the player base as happy as I can possible make them. 

Have you ever been banned or punished on any server? If so, Include details No
How much time do you have to contribute to the role?: 2-4 days a week can very

In your own words, what  are the responsibilities of a Gamemaster?: To make the sever fun and enjoyable for all that come online

 Describe how you would contribute to RP as a part of the Gamemaster team: I would bring good ideas to the table so we can have even  better events then we already have..

Explain your single most creative idea for contributing to the RP environment of the server: This isn't my idea for just one event but I was thinking that we have are events were its not just one sided so if the droids would destroy our ship when we were traveling to another planet then the story would change same if the Clones would win in that space battle then the story would go  in the favored of the clones. The idea of the droids winning in a space battle would mean that the clones would go into the escape pods and crash land on some random planet and would have to survive against the wild live or some random inhabitants. But if the clones win then they would go on to the original mission and this type of changing of the story would happen all through the events based on the results of the battle.

Please list and explain 5 unique event ideas of any scale: [Be sure to include any additional context that may be necessary to your explanation]

1. Man Hunt

This event would start out with Jedi getting captured and sent to an island were they become part of a game were the droids are going to try and hunt down the Jedi But then the clones come to the island and try and save the Jedi so you will have both the clones and the droids that are searching for the Jedi. Clones are trying to save the Jedi and the Droids are trying to kill the Jedi, Jedi will not have weapons but the can use force abilities.

2. Survive

I would like to do an event that is spread out in to multiple days were we crash land on a planet and we have to make a camp and work on getting a signal out to the Republic. The clone would have to survive the wild live and any droids that would come. But engaging every thing would not be a good idea because if you engage a fleet of droids that had a tank instead of letting them pass then you risk the communication being hit and destroyed even more than it already is.

3. Ponds Death

I would like to do a event were I am Ponds instead of Neyo and I end up dyeing and become Neyo. So it would be exactly how the show went were there would be a lot of new clones that come to look at the ship but one is Boba Fett and I end up being captured and killed by the bounty hunts that have captured me but that would not end the event the event would end when the clones find a secure the two others captured by the bounty hunters.

4. The Battle of Ryloth

This would play out just like the battle of Ryloth It would start with the 212th and 501st having to destroy the J1 proton canons without killing the civilians laying around them after the canons are destroyed by the 501st and the 212th and they have got the civilians to safety then Mace Windu and the 91st and the 41st will head to the capital to try and over take it over while the clones are in the battle  Mace Windu goes and try's to  capture Wat Tampor.

5. The Super Weapon

This event will start after the Republic knows about General Grieves new super weapon When Plo Koon tells them after being rescued by Anakin and Ahsoka. The clones of Anaxes will be sent out to stop the weapon stop the weapon from being used on the medical station when the space battle begins the clones and droids will fight it out. the other clones will get in a LAAT and go on to the ship and try and place explosives on the ship to blow up the super weapon and save the clone medical station.

[special 318]

I recommend beefing up your 2 paragraphs for "Why should we choose you over other applicants?" and also adding more to the "Explain your single most creative idea for contributing to the RP environment of the server:". It's always nice to have well detailed and lengthy paragraphs.

Edited June 24, 2020 by special

[AceSWRP 22]

-1, I very rarely see you on the server. I would recommend becoming more active before commiting to a GM position. Your event ideas are very undetailed, and poorly typed out.

[Horse 351]

-1, I havent seen you around alot but the time I have you seem to be a bit toxic to members in 501st. Also your app is pretty short and could ve better as stated above once these improve im glad to give you a +1.

[AlexConway 1,154]

Not sure why you are -1ing when he's been on a valid LOA. The event ideas are decent, not great but not bad, I think you would be a good fit for the GM team. Not every GM needs to run multi-hour events. You've helped me in events before and I think you would be good with some training

[Jdforster 21]

+1 Ranger shows he is a good leader and a good person and is usually active but he is on LOA atm. He has been wanting to apply for a while and i believe Gamemaster suits him well.

[Snapper 36]

I'd take some time to rewrite this before submitting. My application took close to two weeks to make and I still had to make edits after submitting. Try to put yourself in the position of someone who has the power to accept and look at it from their perspective.

7 hours ago, GAMEGURU924 said:

When it comes to why I should be picked  over other Applicants I'm going to be honest I don't really have a lot I can use to be better than others I have no past experience being a game master I have no past experience being a mod.

This is a terrible way to start paragraphs about why you should be picked. You've actually accomplished a lot concidering you were forced to take command because both myself and BatHulk were unable to get in game. 

7 hours ago, GAMEGURU924 said:

In your own words, what  are the responsibilities of a Gamemaster?: To make the sever fun and enjoyable for all that come online

 Describe how you would contribute to RP as a part of the Gamemaster team: I would bring good ideas to the table so we can have even  better events then we already have..

Be more specific here, everyone says this sort of stuff. With the current situation of the server, we need people to bring ideas that will help us long term. 

Again, take some time to work on this and I'd be happy to help you if you want it.

1 hour ago, horsegarrysmod said:

-1, I havent seen you around alot but the time I have you seem to be a bit toxic to members in 501st.

Ranger has been on an LOA. I'd also like to point out that even with that, I've seen him on more often and more recently  than I've seen you. I don't really know how he's been toxic, because if there was an issue with another unit that is serious enough  to be brought up on a GM app, then then Special, Forster or Ace would have brought it up in their replies.

Edited June 24, 2020 by Snapper

[AlexConway 1,154]

Accepted

The event ideas are decent, not great but not bad, I think you would be a good fit for the GM team. Not every GM needs to run multi-hour events. You've helped me in events before and I think you would be good with some training. You've shown activity the past 2 weeks. If Garnet has any discrepancies he can feel free to overrule.

Do not use any commands until I can train you
@Garnet - Lock and Move please

Edited July 1, 2020 by AlexConway