Jayskie's Staff Application

[Jay_ 61]

In-game name: Jayskie    

Age: 26

SteamID (https://steamid.io/): STEAM_0:1:42258588

Warns: 0

Timezone: CT (Central)

Playtime?: 1140:46:18
    
    Do you have access to TeamSpeak and a microphone?: YES

    Do you have the ability to record Garry's Mod videos?: YES
    
    Referral(s):

N/A (I just decided I would like to give it another go)
    
    Past experiences as staff:

Staffed on a couple of defunct DRP servers, one TTT and Garnet DarkRP under the name Kilo Graham for almost a year.
   

Why should we choose you over other applicants?:
    I have previous experience on the server. I am not afraid of hurt feelings if things need to be done/said. I have never been banned from the server. I was almost an admin when I resigned. I am very good at following instructions. I can remain calm while being insulted or berated. I am a very polite individual. I like to help new players. I spend most time in game trying to help others and meet new people.     

    Have you ever been banned or punished on any server? If so, Include details: No I have not
    
    Have you made any previous applications, If so when?: I do not recall when I made my old application but it was accepted and Stalin trained me.
    
    How much time do you have to contribute to the role?: at least 2-3 hours a day but probably more.
   
   If you have any, what hobbies or activities are you involved in outside of Garry's Mod?: I'm a gamer bro

Did you read the staff rules?: Jayskie

[Roofyz 3]

Heyo, I haven't had any problems with you at all In game yet, You've been staff before which Is amazing It would be great to have more experienced staff, As of right now I give you a 

    +1

[Gordita 99]

-1 

You didn’t hit the requirement of 2 paragraphs. I’ve never seen you in game. Fix the paragraphs. 

[RealRichard 106]

-1, Didn’t use two paragraphs + I’ve also never seen you ingame

[Korn 253]

I would love to  +1 since u are a great guy and a great player, but the one paragraph could be more and better. So for now I'm just neutral.

[Jay_ 61]

8 sentences is well more than a single paragraph and the amount of sentences required for a paragraph is debatable, I will concede that I have yet to make either of your acquaintance (I look forward to it ) just wanted to point that out. Also notepad++ was being a bastard with indents and I didn't want to change the format too much as I already spaced it out slightly more to help me keep track when typing. Thanks much for your feedback!

*edit*  I didn't quote properly, was directed at Gordita and RealRichard. I can't delete the post and didn't want to double post, apologies.

Edited March 24, 2023 by Jay_
Clarification

[Jbhh 365]

-1, I play a lot of this sever and have no idea who you are. Try to get some more community reputation before applying.

[RealRichard 106]

3 hours ago, Jay_ said:

8 sentences is well more than a single paragraph and the amount of sentences required for a paragraph is debatable, I will concede that I have yet to make either of your acquaintance (I look forward to it ) just wanted to point that out. Also notepad++ was being a bastard with indents and I didn't want to change the format too much as I already spaced it out slightly more to help me keep track when typing. Thanks much for your feedback!

*edit*  I didn't quote properly, was directed at Gordita and RealRichard. I can't delete the post and didn't want to double post, apologies.

My main reason for the -1 was not seeing you online, not the paragraphs. Either way my -1 does not mean I do not wish to see you on the team, I wish you the best of luck.

[Jbhh 365]

4 hours ago, Jay_ said:

8 sentences is well more than a single paragraph and the amount of sentences required for a paragraph is debatable, I will concede that I have yet to make either of your acquaintance (I look forward to it ) just wanted to point that out. Also notepad++ was being a bastard with indents and I didn't want to change the format too much as I already spaced it out slightly more to help me keep track when typing. Thanks much for your feedback!

*edit*  I didn't quote properly, was directed at Gordita and RealRichard. I can't delete the post and didn't want to double post, apologies.

While you are right that what defines a paragraph is subjective. It is very clear that when writing this app you did not put time or effort into it. You have sentences that are 6 words long and honestly none of it is substantive. I think you should re-evaluate your paragraphs in their entirety and go reference some other accepted staff apps. I think that having past experience goes a long way but without putting in the effort to show why you should be picked I can't in good faith +1.

Edited March 24, 2023 by Hama

[Fat Good BOI 208]

Missing paragraph -1

 

[tdizz 1,058]

-1 

personally haven’t seen you in game. And although that “paragraph” you wrote meets the requirement it has little to no detail, go the extra mile and then you will stand out.

[1998Corolla 333]

-1

1100hrs and so far no one seems to really know who you are. Which either you're an old head that hasn't played in a while and doesn't know anyone or you're active and stay in a base. 

Regardless, seems like a weak application and you need to get more familiarized with people in the community. 

[StraightWhiteChristianMale 563]

+1 good member of community

[Hoal 564]

-1
I know you were staff before but I would recommand you get some more community reputation before reapplying
because ngl you just came back but people dont know who you are

[stretchy 725]

Denied

You may reapply in 72 hours though I recommend waiting longer to get yourself more known within the community

Please do not reuse your application

Be sure to use the criticism given here to improve upon your next application