Mini1egend 0 Posted March 29, 2021 Share Posted March 29, 2021 In-game name: Mini1egendAge: 18SteamID (https://steamid.io/): STEAM_0:0:196969019Warns: 0Timezone: BSTPlaytime?: 87:15:13Do you have access to TeamSpeak and a microphone?: [YES/NO] YESDo you have the ability to record Garry's Mod videos?:[YES/NO] YES Referral(s): [What administrator recommended you to apply?] Past experiences as staff: [Optional] N/A Why should we choose you over other applicants? [minimum 2 paragraphs] When I first joined this server I really got stuck into it probably playing 10hours straight that day, all the people I bumped into was friendly and we had lots of fun with all the plugins especially the gambling side of it. Witch made me want to come black and play some more, witch I have been playing this server for probably around 2 weeks now so iv got know mostly all the players witch are online as frequent as me. But a couple nights ago I had a couple problems myself like people mass RDMing. So I went to report and there was no staff online and this has happened a couple days now that there has been no staff online to help, so I thought I would have a look at the forums to see if there was anything I could do to resolve these problems myself then I scrolled across the staff applications. So I thought why not take it upon myself to apply to become a moderator so I could resolve these problems myself so I could be online the times these other members of staff are not on and i could keep everyone happy and keep them wanting to play more and keep coming back. I would also like to become a good role model to all the players on the server to try and decrease all the bad behavior, to keep everyone happy while also being a fun stuff member witch can have some Banta with people on the server. I would also in my free time go around chatting and having fun in my free time when off duty witch would hopefully keep people on the server and wanting to come back. so I would like to say I could be a brilliant staff model and could keep everyone happy while sorting out all the problems. Have you ever been banned or punished on any server? If so, Include details No Have you made any previous applications, If so when?: No How much time do you have to contribute to the role?: around 4 or 5 days a week from 6pm - 1am If you have any, what hobbies or activities are you involved in outside of Garry's Mod? I am a Plumbing heating engineer I also do a bit of vinyl wrapping in my spare time on cars. Did you read the staff rules?: "did you read the staff rules" Mini1egend 1 Link to comment
GrosCave 284 Posted March 29, 2021 Share Posted March 29, 2021 (edited) All right, I've got some points that bother me in this application. First off, please use a grammar check website or app (Grammarly is free and works quite well) to correct the mistakes in your app. Then, you say you know everyone online at the same time as you but I think I saw you once or so and never really had any interaction with you. Following, I feel like your paragraphs were made in 5 minutes. All you talk about is having fun with players and taking care of sits while no one is on (I feel like there's always a staff or two even during the "dead" times). Anyways, please try to work on your app by showing us your skills with some examples and telling us more about yourself. I'm not trying to be mean or sound like the Grinch, this is feedback so you can work on your application and make it the best you can! For now, I'm gonna have to say -1. Good Luck! Edited March 29, 2021 by GrosCave playtime 1 Link to comment
Shin_Tsukimi 2,246 Posted March 29, 2021 Share Posted March 29, 2021 39 minutes ago, GrosCave said: Following, your playtime is very near the minimal playtime required 3 Link to comment
GrosCave 284 Posted March 29, 2021 Share Posted March 29, 2021 (edited) 54 minutes ago, Shin_Tsukimi said: @Shin_Tsukimi mhm mhm I see. Still isn't the number one reason for my decision, just taking it into consideration. I'll edit it out tho Edited March 29, 2021 by GrosCave 2 Link to comment
Yamagata 175 Posted March 29, 2021 Share Posted March 29, 2021 (edited) -1 From Me For Right Now | That Can Change, Read Below Hey Mini1legend, Definitely should run through your application again to correct the grammar mistakes ("which" not "witch" and "I've" not "iv" to get you started). Additionally, your first paragraph doesn't fit the prompt "Why should we choose you over other applicants" very well. I would definitely add another paragraph that fits the prompt better. I believe I've ran into you a couple of times and I don't remember any bad experiences between us. But, for right now I'm going to leave my feedback at a -1 until you make some necessary changes to your application. -Yama Edited March 29, 2021 by Yamagata 1 1 Link to comment
Torq 349 Posted March 30, 2021 Share Posted March 30, 2021 Neutral haven’t had many interactions with u Link to comment
Rambo-Panda 92 Posted March 30, 2021 Share Posted March 30, 2021 NEUTRAL -Never seen you ingame before -You should spice up your paragraphs a bit more -Minimum playtime which is ok -Knows the rules On this note, i can't say much more as i have never seen you ingame before but good luck ! Link to comment
Romac622 216 Posted March 30, 2021 Share Posted March 30, 2021 On 3/29/2021 at 6:42 AM, Mini1egend said: Witch made me want to come black and play some more, witch I have been playing this server for probably around 2 weeks now so iv got know mostly all the players witch are online as frequent as me. This application seems somewhat rushed, so I will keep it at a Neutral. But say if you hop on Teamspeak or ingame and help me get to know you, I'll probably change my decision. From what I can see right now on this app, is that it seems rushed and not that much effort put into it. Expand more on your paragraphs and try to give more reasons why you should join our staff team. Link to comment
GrandDaddyStalin 199 Posted March 31, 2021 Share Posted March 31, 2021 -1 Please make grammar corrections and I will take a look again. On 3/29/2021 at 10:18 AM, Yamagata said: -1 From Me For Right Now | That Can Change, Read Below Hey Mini1legend, Definitely should run through your application again to correct the grammar mistakes ("which" not "witch" and "I've" not "iv" to get you started). Additionally, your first paragraph doesn't fit the prompt "Why should we choose you over other applicants" very well. I would definitely add another paragraph that fits the prompt better. I believe I've ran into you a couple of times and I don't remember any bad experiences between us. But, for right now I'm going to leave my feedback at a -1 until you make some necessary changes to your application. -Yama Link to comment
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