508yungebkilla 0 Posted February 4, 2022 Share Posted February 4, 2022 In-game name: 508ebkillaAge: 17SteamID (https://steamid.io/): STEAM_0:0:590584906Warns: 0Timezone: ESTPlaytime?: 508ebkilla has played for 672:33:05Do you have access to TeamSpeak and a microphone?: [YES/NO]Do you have the ability to record Garry's Mod videos?:[YES/NO] Referral(s): [What administrator recommended you to apply?] Past experiences as staff: [Optional] Why should we choose you over other applicants? [minimum 2 paragraphs] I been playing Garnet Dark RP for a long time and I think its time to become a staff on the server, I have been workin hard, playing a lot, and getting to know people in the community, I base up sometimes and been workin hard to get my hours up, and keep a good rep on the server with no warns or bans. If I was staff I would probably play a lot more and I would be able to contribute a lot to the role, I think its important to have the people who are willing to do hard work and I think I can be that person. Another thing I wanted to talk about is that I am really good at resolving situations easily, and I am normally a very likable person which I think could be very important to have in the community, and I feel like I can bring the hours, activity, and seriousness that a super official server like Garnet Gaming Dark RP is looking for. Have you ever been banned or punished on any server? If so, Include details Have you made any previous applications, If so when?: How much time do you have to contribute to the role?: I got like 4 hours on weekdays and all day on weekends If you have any, what hobbies or activities are you involved in outside of Garry's Mod? I play ball, and I workoutDid you read the staff rules?: 508ebkilla Link to comment
Jaz- 338 Posted February 5, 2022 Share Posted February 5, 2022 Your paragraphs are quite short and don’t really go into any details, but you have good playtime and you read the staff rules. neutral for now Link to comment
NotCookie 108 Posted February 5, 2022 Share Posted February 5, 2022 (edited) -1 Good playtime but all you have in your app is three sentences, I'll have to see what others think about you too to change my opinion. Just make sure to add more sentences to make it two paragraphs and you're good. Edited February 5, 2022 by xCookie Link to comment
Candy_ 59 Posted February 5, 2022 Share Posted February 5, 2022 neutral ill se what other ppl say -barely/rarely seen u on -no interaction with you +good playtime +staff rules read -barely 2 paragraphs + they don't go into detail Link to comment
Rambo-Panda 92 Posted February 5, 2022 Share Posted February 5, 2022 Neutral- Short paragraphs barely not even 2. You aren't really telling us much either why choose you over another applicant- Good playtime- Never really had many interactions with you so i can't say much Just beef up your paragraphs and you are good to go bud !Good Luck ! Link to comment
Shin_Tsukimi 2,246 Posted February 5, 2022 Share Posted February 5, 2022 12 hours ago, 508yungebkilla said: In-game name: 508ebkilla Hey man, I'm curious did you just come back after a long time or something? I've never seen you before, unless you have run by a different name in the past. Could you elaborate? Thanks. Link to comment
Fetn 1,217 Posted February 5, 2022 Share Posted February 5, 2022 21 hours ago, 508yungebkilla said: I base up sometimes and been workin hard to get my hours up doesnt really answer the question so sort of filler 21 hours ago, 508yungebkilla said: If I was staff I would probably play a lot more and I would be able to contribute a lot to the role, I think its important to have the people who are willing to do hard work and I think I can be that person. I mean it answeers the question but its the bare minimum of what a new staff should do. 21 hours ago, 508yungebkilla said: Another thing I wanted to talk about is that I am really good at resolving situations easily, and I am normally a very likable person which I think could be very important to have in the community, and I feel like I can bring the hours, activity, and seriousness that a super official server like Garnet Gaming Dark RP is looking for. this isn't even a paragraph fam.. Overall paragraphs are weak and I don't know who you are.. at all -1 1 3 Link to comment
P1ss_Puppy 14 Posted February 6, 2022 Share Posted February 6, 2022 Neutral - Paragraphs Are Empty (Not Much Context) - Amazing Hours - Read Rules - Never have actually seen you on the server so can't say much in terms of personality Link to comment
rapts 133 Posted February 7, 2022 Share Posted February 7, 2022 (edited) +1! 508yungebkilla no more elaboration Edited February 7, 2022 by Rapts Link to comment
xFish 394 Posted February 7, 2022 Share Posted February 7, 2022 Everything checks out on your staff app more or less. I havn't seen you respond to any of the comments and you've had quite a long time to do that. Either means you're lazy or don't know how to respond to criticism. But uh if you fix your paragraphs you'd prolly get accepted. Link to comment
508yungebkilla 0 Posted February 8, 2022 Topic Author Share Posted February 8, 2022 On 2/7/2022 at 11:15 AM, xFish said: Everything checks out on your staff app more or less. I havn't seen you respond to any of the comments and you've had quite a long time to do that. Either means you're lazy or don't know how to respond to criticism. But uh if you fix your paragraphs you'd prolly get accepted. general criticism thing, I figure if I messed up this app I'm going to have to make another one anyways, plus my replies take like 73 days to get accepted/seen on forums. I have read all the suggestions the past few days and if I have to make a new app at some point I will, with all the added necessities, I just never really believed in rambling on and repeating myself for 2 whole paragraphs if that's what you were referring to, because to be completely honest there could be other better candidates then me I'm not really sure, all I know is that I have the motivation to play and I know I am ready for the role/responsibility, I have no clue what anyone else has to bring to the table. Other people could have years of experience of staffing on other gmod servers, and they can put that in their paragraphs to chunk them up if that's really what's needed to become staff, and if 2 full paragraphs is really what is needed to give responsibility then that's cool, never been amazing at doing stuff with paragraph requirements in school settings, but I guess I got to try now if this gets denied. Link to comment
GrosCave 284 Posted February 8, 2022 Share Posted February 8, 2022 DENIED You may reapply in 72 hours. You mentioned reading the criticism, please use them to improve on your next application. Make sure not to reuse any paragraph. Link to comment
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